Dystopian Opening using all of grammar for writing
Day twenty four and they still haven’t realized that I am a robot. For top of the range company like chroming network, whose facilities are supposed to be the best in the world, this is a dump, a sewer rat heaven. As soon as I get the correct information on the x5 and who ever is behind this I will communicate with my robot general, planet piper will be saved from destruction. Ok, I have to go now I have a meeting with the big boss . I hope they haven’t caught what my true identity really is, fingers crossed, as I stepped into perhaps the worst one of all, I think the most feared thing in this gut rumbling building,was the dreadful smell. I just got back, I have just found out about the x5, its not a thing, its a who!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Above my room, was the bosses room, and inside that room was a crucial piece of writing, that anyone would pay 1 million pounds for, that piece of writing is the fait of planet piper. If Piper was to come to an end, it would have an enormous effect way beyond our imagination, surely it will. There are to many of them for me to take out by my self we need some reinforcements or something because we need an army whose strong enough to take out an entire army!!!!!!!!
Sir, can you hand out the pictures and sheets that describe what relative clauses and everything is please.
Dystopian Openings Subordinate Clauses- Edited
The man would not find his keys, unless he covered his tracks.
Without their striker, the team would not score any goals.
The police were not going to arrest the murderer until they had sufficient evidence.
More class work
It was a bright cold day in april. Winston Smith’s chin nuzzled in an effort to escape the vile wind. Meanwhile slipped through the doors of Victory mansions. Although not quick enough to stop a swirl of dust from entering along with him.
Class Work
The man that walked down the middle of the road beckoned me to join him.
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